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From my artwork, what do you think I should improve on? 

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23 deviants said Nah, I don't see any improvement needed
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12 deviants said Character Anatomy
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5 deviants said Facial Expression
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4 deviants said Background
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4 deviants said Colors
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2 deviants said Special Effects
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1 deviant said Clothings
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1 deviant said Others (State in comment)
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No deviants said Composition

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Scheve94 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your colored work especially is coming along strongly when you make complete pieces. I feel like you're not patient sometimes and rush through some works, which causes them to either miss a background or lack detail in shading. Generally anything you do for your commissions looks great. In pieces like these: arsonicartz.deviantart.com/art… do take care that you might be making too many colors clash with each other. Your technique is good so it'd be a shame to let it suffer from the composition as a whole. You're getting better at the overall product though, which I think is impressive cause it has a lot of facets. Some of your technique in color doesn't translate as much to your black and white works, which, although they have their own style, I sometimes think don't look as good as your colored works. Awesome seeing you develop this much on the color spectrum, as I've seen you pick up coloring back when I was still active and we talked a lot :D Keep up your current progression and stay critical, my friend.

P.S.: Your pageviews took me by surprise. Going good, dude.
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2017
Honestly it's the shading in your comics that could use some work. Take this for example. arsonicartz.deviantart.com/art… Try going for some line shading similar to this i.imgur.com/dSyviFY.jpg oi58.tinypic.com/2637vc5.jpg

It seems everything else is fine from what I've seen so far. Keep working hard on your artwork^^
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ARSONicARTZ Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you for your honesty :)
I'll work hardinto it :)
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