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From my artwork, what do you think I should improve on? 

23 deviants said Nah, I don't see any improvement needed
12 deviants said Character Anatomy
5 deviants said Facial Expression
4 deviants said Background
4 deviants said Colors
2 deviants said Special Effects
1 deviant said Clothings
1 deviant said Others (State in comment)
No deviants said Composition

Devious Comments

Scheve94 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your colored work especially is coming along strongly when you make complete pieces. I feel like you're not patient sometimes and rush through some works, which causes them to either miss a background or lack detail in shading. Generally anything you do for your commissions looks great. In pieces like these:… do take care that you might be making too many colors clash with each other. Your technique is good so it'd be a shame to let it suffer from the composition as a whole. You're getting better at the overall product though, which I think is impressive cause it has a lot of facets. Some of your technique in color doesn't translate as much to your black and white works, which, although they have their own style, I sometimes think don't look as good as your colored works. Awesome seeing you develop this much on the color spectrum, as I've seen you pick up coloring back when I was still active and we talked a lot :D Keep up your current progression and stay critical, my friend.

P.S.: Your pageviews took me by surprise. Going good, dude.
FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2017
Honestly it's the shading in your comics that could use some work. Take this for example.… Try going for some line shading similar to this

It seems everything else is fine from what I've seen so far. Keep working hard on your artwork^^
ARSONicARTZ Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you for your honesty :)
I'll work hardinto it :)
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